I think the story line was amazing and would make a really good film - I would watch it I think you should have written a more detailed description in paragraphs rather than bullet points because I enjoyed it and would like to have read more. But overall I LOVED IT
i really really love the plot, it is a really good story line and seems like one of those professional plots. it would be a movie that i would have to watch :D
Very good but slightly confusing.
ReplyDeleteI think the story line was amazing and would make a really good film - I would watch it
ReplyDeleteI think you should have written a more detailed description in paragraphs rather than bullet points because I enjoyed it and would like to have read more.
But overall I LOVED IT
I really like you story synopsis its very interesting and its creative! Wish i could read a full detailed synopsis. keep the good job up!
ReplyDeletei really really love the plot, it is a really good story line and seems like one of those professional plots. it would be a movie that i would have to watch :D
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